11/02/2020
Today’s class was understanding the basic points onto improving our story . Where we spoke about direct and literal . We even discussed title how it influences a reader . So today’s excercise was to review one peer’s work and write our observation . Also , getting our work reviwed by someone in oder to get feedback . The work i reviwed had great descrption and great elaborative insights but the direction of the story was vague . One story which was based on a historical connection of literature which i couldn’t relate to as a reader . The second was genric ideas being repeated . Even the title names which were so direct and known in the real world .
These were my six chapters and mainly the reviws i got was my story being too dreamy and full of magic . Because the concept i based upon was actually magic . My concept of world which has no darkness only positivity . But at the end is the suspenseful obverse part of the city which has the darkest hell that could not be imagined for all the sinners as a punishment .
What i learnt from today’s class was different perspective how they can change the message of the writer . Different perspective being genric realistic and good at descriptive sense . This gives us an actual introspection to be in a writers shoe before observing and reviewing .
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