18/02/2020
Today was the discussion upon observations , opinions and building the final draft . This is where we took various examples of opinions . We discussed how a person can anaylse the writing as a third person and even include personal opinions . Then we even moved on how to make the essays better.
Firstly, grammatically being right was important , next complete sentences and avoiding repetation of ideas . Then after taking the feedback i also introspected my essays were how reality had become my boundary . So this is where i changed some parts of my essay based upon reality to something more creative . Even the phrase short and crisp is what i pratically understood through example of my own essay . This minute parts made the essay more enriched with new thoughts and ideas .
Then lastly we had a discussion upon critical reflections they can be in each blog even though they are nit directly connected to the subject .Like how my learnings through the day were affected by seminar . Like how studio class helped in expanding my artwork to fill spaces that actually removed excess from my seminar essays .
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